Chapter 1, pg 4

posted 27th Nov 2014, 1:57 PM

Chapter 1, pg 4
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28th Nov 2014, 3:02 AM

kalliikak

great intro and good looking page! i'm glad you've finally gotten to a place where you can start showing off the story you've been working on. very exciting! keep it up ^.^

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28th Nov 2014, 8:14 AM

Magp1e

I shall certainly keep up the work. I know it'll get better and better. Spacing out the story has been helpful.

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24th Mar 2015, 3:10 PM

irongate

That castle is fantastic and it's nice to see such diversity in your cast. What really hit us here, the fabulously written narrative aside, was how you again grounded everything with the final panel. Having the audience look up to Goroth the same way you made us look up to the castle is a great way to join the idea of his being King, it really adds to the Majesty and makes him look so much more regal.

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