Chapter 1, pg 5

posted 4th Dec 2014, 6:00 AM

Chapter 1, pg 5
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4th Dec 2014, 12:04 PM

kalliikak

nice lighting and clothing designs! you make me want to start a comic again! ^.^

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8th Dec 2014, 2:16 PM

Spelledeg

I can't wait to see how the story unfolds with this. :) I also really love Sonia's design, she's lovely! There's a good bout of world set up in the prologue and it'll be really cool to see how it shows through in the coming pages.

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24th Mar 2015, 12:15 PM

marshallreeves

Love the 3rd panel. Captures the look-of- wonder expression perfectly

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24th Mar 2015, 3:13 PM

irongate

Having Goroth leaned forward on this page after seeing him in such a regal way on the previous page is a great way to show the passage of time, it's subtle and brilliant. Really like how you illustrate Sonia and Marguerite, reminds us somewhat of the classic Disney style. The look of wonder in Sonia's youthful eyes is really well done as well, really draws us in, as does Marguerite's look of smug contempt.

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