Chapter 1, pg 6

posted 11th Dec 2014, 6:52 AM

Chapter 1, pg 6
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11th Dec 2014, 6:52 AM

Magp1e

Marguerite is not a nice person.

Trying to get back on track this past week, so sorry if there was a dip in quality!

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11th Dec 2014, 7:22 AM

CinemochaRK

"Get in, loser, we're going shopping!"

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11th Dec 2014, 8:02 AM

Magp1e

hahaha! I love that movie. I can see the similarity ;D

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24th Mar 2015, 3:20 PM

irongate

Your expressions are masterful, a bit of a critique however, your panel structure, as in how you compose the image inside, could have used a bit more forethought here. The face of one of Marguerite's cronies was cut off in the first and third panel, something you should avoid, especially when you convey expression so well.

You write dialogue just as well as you do exposition which is nice to see, some writers don't do spoken dialogue as well, it reads stiffly, yours doesn't. It's very natural, poised and passive aggressive but it would be we think, given how Sonia is a royal.

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13th Jul 2015, 3:16 AM

Adrek Norn

more stupid some persons are more cruel they can be

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