Chapter 1, pg 7

posted 18th Dec 2014, 6:12 AM

Chapter 1, pg 7
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18th Dec 2014, 10:53 AM

Spelledeg

I like how Sonia responds without words so well, it's very cool. Great expressions on this page! :)

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24th Mar 2015, 3:22 PM

irongate

Composition here is much better, more thoroughly planned out, it's nice to see your mastery of subtle expression not covered by the dialogue. Using the scribble to show Sonia's annoyance was a bit unnecessary, the expression on her face does a better job then the scribble ever could, the last panel being a great example of that.

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24th Mar 2015, 3:29 PM

Magp1e

That's good advice! I will remove said scribble. <3 Thank you for the feedback!

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25th Mar 2015, 5:36 PM

undeadloaf

Awe hes so adorable, i want one

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