Chapter 1, pg 8

posted 18th Dec 2014, 8:27 PM

Chapter 1, pg 8
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24th Mar 2015, 3:33 PM

irongate

We got a bit lost for a moment on this page, the third panel looked like it was supposed to be the second which is because of our browser dimensions to some degree. What may help is thinking of how the eye falls down a page like a tilted Z. That aside this is another great page with fantastic expressions, do wish the dialogue balloons were a bit cleaner, maybe use the Ellipse tool to create them?

We put our text down then create a new layer, toss an Ellipse down of any size, right click inside the Ellipse we've done and select "Make Selection" then fill that in with white and transform the Ellipse to fit, use a Magnetic Lasso tool to make tail then put a stroke of 6 around the whole thing. Nice and clean.

Another quick thing on expressions we'd like to mention is how the baby dragon, that is cute as all get out by the way, also has fantastic expressions, the one in the first panel is adorable!

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