Chapter 1, pg 9

posted 18th Dec 2014, 9:17 PM

Chapter 1, pg 9
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26th Feb 2015, 6:17 AM

Magp1e

Welcome back to Avariella! Only took me like 2 months to get back on the horse wow I am amazing.

But seriously, thanks everyone for your support! Our views are growing every day. If you like what we do, please check our updates every Thursday. If you follow our facebook, you will see a teaser every Tuesday. The more viewership I get, the more time I can spend doing comics!

Thank you for your patience!~

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24th Mar 2015, 3:37 PM

irongate

Dialogue balloons on this page are much better only now they obscure too much of your gorgeous work! Maybe bring the white of them down to 80% opacity, it's something we do for that exact reason.

That said the dialogue reads wonderfully, your skills as an artist are amazing, it's your skill as a brilliant writer that really has us enthralled and clicking onward.

Love Sonia's expression in that last panel and how you added to it with her hand, nice touch.

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