Prologue, Page 4

posted 31st Oct 2014, 7:00 AM

Prologue, Page 4
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31st Oct 2014, 1:54 PM

Lee V.

This looks really good so far!

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31st Oct 2014, 2:36 PM

Crime

I am intrigued!

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8th Dec 2014, 10:46 AM

DylanJBlakeley

LOVED the look of the prologue... really well done!

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24th Mar 2015, 2:56 PM

irongate

The shattering of the glass at the end is really cool, a great way to show the disintegration of tradition. The narrative here was exceptional as well, very well written. Great art in webcomics is somewhat easy to find, great storytelling and great writing are a bit more difficult, Avariella has all three.

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