Chapter 1, pg 1

posted 6th Nov 2014, 6:00 AM

Chapter 1, pg 1
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6th Nov 2014, 6:00 AM

Magp1e

Happy first official update! I know we aren't very far in the series, but I'm so happy to finally be sharing it. <3 Thank you all for joining me! I couldn't be more grateful for it.

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11th Nov 2014, 9:31 PM

Betti Felon

e'hem, please. :)

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24th Mar 2015, 3:00 PM

irongate

Using a map to show Goroth's expedition is a great idea, same goes for the texture of the narration balloons but really sticks out here is the background in panel 2. Backgrounds are often neglected in comics, we're guilty of that, you've tied the first panel down to the second with the background and grounded everything, brought your audience in expertly in a very subtle way. Well done.

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13th Jul 2015, 3:01 AM

Adrek Norn

Hi, I like a lot your style :-) I'm reading

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